In the library on Thursday night, I allowed Hailey Scott to review each of my six poems that I have written. At first, I was not in the mindset to pay attention to her editing. However, when she was looking over my poetry, she was not laughing at any of my jokes, but instead, seriously wanted to help me with my writing. Her ideas were in the same general idea that I was thinking. She strongly enforced the idea of changing the title I once had on the poem about nose bleeds.

It was difficult to listen to her talk about my poetry. She made small edits here and there that made the story a bit clearer in each poem. Thank you Hailey.

Next week I will get the six poems that I have written edited. It needs to be done, and it will.